Do I have any followers who happen to read my Gravity Falls fanfic on AO3 and want to beta read my new chapter and help me improve it some?

Its like, super heavy on dialogue and I’m having trouble making it not be like… just dialogue at some parts, since they’re kinda just standing there? I dont want to put actions in there just for the sake of it either, though, since that seems kind of unnatural in the situation…

I’m bad with writing stuff like casual gestures during conversation… I like leaving a certain amount of leeway for the readers imagination because of that… But leaving it ALL to the imagination means its literally ALL dialogue at some parts.

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